The writing of this book pained my soul more each page. The metaphors are outright awful. This one really got to me (more so than the other thousands):
"The images, like stones buried among coals to bake loaves of kurba, are too hot to touch." -in reference to a girl who's
…more sister died, trying to remember events.
Had this book not been a school assignment, I would rather have shoved glass under my eyelids than ever try to read it. The writing is atrocious, and made my reading experience utterly terrible. The only reason I didn't put a 1 for the rating was because the story is amazing. Let's be honest, this guy did more than what most people could imagine doing, and he did it well. Kudos to him. However, the way it was illustrated through words literally made me want to stick my finger in a pencil sharpener. This has ridiculously bad writing. Bad bad bad. I've read depressed teenagers' poems with better metaphors. (less)
