What do you think about the alternating viewpoints between Emma and Leo? Did this help in understanding the story or cause confusion?
Created: 01/28/23
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I thought this was an interesting way to develop the story. This is one current innovation that writers seem to be using - it works well here because of the plot twists and turns. Plus, I felt it gave the author a chance to develop her characters a little more deeply than a traditional method of telling the story might allow.
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I enjoyed the alternating views because it showed when Leo first became suspicious about Emma's past, but it also showed when Emma suspected Leo had questions about her past. I also liked the glimpses into Emma's past that enlightened some parts of her story but didn't allow the reader to see the full picture.
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Seems like everyone is bouncing around in either or both the timeline and the voice. Sometimes I can’t stand it and have to go back to figure who or when someone is. Rosie Walsh used this technique beautifully. Revealing stuff you needed to know without giving away anything that you didn’t need to know yet. It must have been a challenge to figure what to say ‘now’ or save til ‘later’. Well done!
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